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New HeartLurking deep in the night,
Moon casts a shadow bright.
Shines on the owl in flight,
Radiates peace tonight.

Remains till a new day,
With love here to soon stay.
This joy not to decay,
Melody starts to play.

Pretty until the end,
All of these rules to bend.
His love to each one send,
And a hope to here lend.

Creates a work of art,
That begins from the start.
Each color does a part,
To design this new heart.
sisterssisters are
clothes borrowers, fit throwers,
cover stealers, secret keepers
an ename, a friend
a conversation with out end,
sassy, bossy, silly, fussy, pretty,& sweet, tea partys with treats, dress up, mess up, fess up, get punished, fights over nothing, sharers of dreams, a headache, a pain, a princess, a brat, she ruined my hat, i love her, i tease her, she is my family and that means more to me. what would i do with out her
At the time i knew nothing differentAt the time i knew nothing different, I was the class punching bag. I knew the ritual wake up go to school. I knew I wore bad clothing. Tore, scraped, and battered. The teachers turned their heads and the sight of a child like me. They knew what went on those swings or behind that bush. They knew. Those "children" would carve mean names like "Badger face" or "stinky pits". I laughed. I never cried. Show no weakness my dad use to say. Right before he got to the bottom of that bottle. "you're beautiful, honey" you mother would say on that lunch box note. Kids knew I got those, they'd snatch them up and tear it beofre I got to read it. Years and
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~SeraphanRaziel Jun 8, 2010
:la: This is one of the best poems yet! Your poetry is remarkably beautiful! :la:
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*meregoddess Jun 8, 2010
You flatter me way too much, but thanks for the kind words :)
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~SeraphanRaziel Jun 8, 2010
You're welcome, and I don't think I flatter you too much. I know good things when I see them. :nod: So don't argue with me, or I'll throw a pie at you. :XD: I've been wanting a pie war for awhile now. *hey, somebody throw a pie already!* :excited:
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*meregoddess Jun 8, 2010
*munch munch gobble* Uh, can I just throw the pan?
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~SeraphanRaziel Jun 8, 2010
:omg: Sure. Just let me duck out of the way first! :omg:
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~SedahLiah Jun 8, 2010   Writer
I really love that first stanza, it ends on such a powerful note that I kind of wish it were the last, but the way you wrote it is still remarkable. Great job. :thumbsup:
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*meregoddess Jun 8, 2010
Thank you so much!
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~SedahLiah Jun 8, 2010   Writer
=D
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