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I wrote this poem based on the character in the image
The aberration which was drawn by Meltin


We did this for a contest for im-not-sana.
Meltin's faces are amazing, and well worth a look, as well as his other art work. Contest or no contest, it was pure enjoyment working with him and creating a poem and a face that worked with each other.

As a teacher, I've also dealt with students who on the outside may not be beautiful but have clean and wonderful souls and an inner beauty that shines through their outward appearance. I love them all equally, but must confess to a special soft spot for those who are less than perfect and have little achievement outside of my class.

We are all beautiful in our own ways, regardless of how we look...
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~Treentime Oct 28, 2010
I came across this after seeing the drawing on the artist's site. Despite how much I like that drawing I'm tempted to agree with him on his judgement of this. It struck a chord with me and I found it quite moving. For that happy moment I thank you.
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*meregoddess Oct 28, 2010
How wonderfully sweet of you say. You are totally welcome. :)
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*AlexisDecay13 May 30, 2010
I like this poem. Well done! =)
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*meregoddess May 30, 2010
Oh thank you so very much!
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Mood: Joy =Venry May 14, 2010  Student General Artist
This is very beautiful, I love how it flows. The words you choose also contribute well to the piece!
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*meregoddess May 14, 2010
Oh thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed!
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=Venry May 16, 2010  Student General Artist
I did!
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~Aro-chan May 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I thought this was a pretty sentimental portrayal of the feelings of less-then-perfect person in a society obsessed with the superficial.

I think, you could have done more with the imagery and the flow. Used stronger words, more balanced and sentence. ALso, if i may suggest, the last line would have had more effect as "I dream you dream and want your wants"
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*meregoddess May 14, 2010
Oh I love your last line, I wish I would have used it now.

I did it for a contest, that's why I used that particular image.

But you hit the nose on the head about the message, sentimental or not. :)
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~Aro-chan May 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Well, nothing special about that. But this was sweet =)
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